Film Noir Beach

Done as part of a practice session with poses of 2 minutes in length. My current goal is: Improve at correctly controlling & understanding distorting the 4-point perspective in a scene and/or environment. Here is a black-and-white beach shore side, and I'm really trying to go for some control and understanding how I distort the 4pt perspective in my scene and environment. What do y'all think? What can I do to make it really, really great? Or am I all set???