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© 2021 AkikomaDone as part of a 30 minute class.
My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering
Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.
I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.
Hey, akikoma, nice job on the assassin pose. Very awesome.
Well, if I could give you a very, very sincere editorial, then it would be to say that I love the pose energy going on here, in terms of the forces and forms, but I totally don't get enough of the vitality of the forces and forms, here. Why don't you please loosen up the perceptions of edges and spaces, through 121 minutes of 2 minutes of attitudes???? (121/2=about 61 manners)
The reason why? It's because it would, could and should help out on your studes less rigid, and more caricatured, exaggerated, and satirized.