Hands UP!

Good morning Cinnomin, and welcome to Line of Action. I'm Polyvios Animations, how are you doing today? Great job on your lines of action and your forceful forms. Your understaning of solid, dimensional drawings, and your sensibility of weight and mass in drawing, captures a lot of the spirit of Bill Tytla. Keep on trying new talents and skills.

Yet however, your lines are to rough and sketchy, and your shapes and spaces are too hairy. Would you please smooth out your lines and caricature your figures and human anatomies with a 30 minute class mode? If your next goal is to make your lines more bold and smooth, then I encourage you to go ahead with the daring experiment. For more on Bill Tytla, then click on this link please. Otherwise, your drawings are ready for your worldbuilding. I hope these have helped you out and encouraged you. Good morning.

Proko's videos are actually quite good. You can watch free versions on youtube. But I suggest to take them really slowly. I always gave myself a week of practice before moving on to the next body part. But I also noticed that just practicing was making pulling me down, so I've started just scribbling around again and enjoying myself. Always depends on where you want to go with your skillset.