Jennifer

Good afternoon, Tx Williep, and welcome back to LOA. Greater job on your pose from your original life session, in pen and ink. Greater job on showing your lines, spaces, relationships, and forms. Keep pushing yourself smarter and harder.

I'm not getting enough of the rawer energy and vitality and spontanaety in the edges. Would you kindly free up your lines with 1 hour of 30 second blind contours and continuous lines? So that your poses with all their lines will be more and more in touch with the right side of the brain. For more info, look into the Nicolaidest book on drawing, and the Betty Edwards books on Amazon and more.

Hope these things have helped you out so much.

Polyvious again thank you for critiquing my work. This is the original 5 min pen & ink life drawing. I am considering doing a third version in watercolor. I feel it will hold together much better than the colored pencil version. I do really appreciate your comments & advice. In a local life drawing session, it is others beside me. We do 1 min, 2 min, 5 min, and 10 or more minute poses. The whole session lasts 2 hours once a week. I need to do more practice at home.