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© 2023 JcmlfineartFinal drawing.
I had a hard time with the expression on the face; it is all correct, I have measured it a billion times, but it's somehow off. GRR!
Is this just me looking at it too long? Or is the drawing too stiff? Or is it the eyes
OR, I don't know, something... (Enter proper feelings of frustration here)
Anyway. I could use some help.
Thanks for your critiques and help. I will learn more next time.
All the best,
JCML Fine Art
Good morning again, Jcmlfineart, I think that your child pose, gestures, and expression is positively and utterly on the most right track, but I feel that the organicness in their flows and fluidities could use even most pushing and pulling for the most extreme-est squash-and-stretch vibes yet. Why don't you please free up your lines of action of the figures with 5.67 hours of 14 second babies and children, followed by 5 minutes of 30 second hands, feet, faces, and expressions sketches, all flipped vertically??
The logic for this bit of the most utterly constructive criticism is because of one legitimate reason: To help make your kid sketches the most strongest in your graphic stylization, therefore to make them the least stilted, and the most alive and motivated from within. (Learned that quote from John K. Stuff's Cartoon College Year 2 post.) Not to mention that if you really wanna know more about what I mean, please check out links 1 2, and 3. Good luck to you and your very marvelous marches of progress!