Portrait 1

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  • May 30, 2017 10:15am #397

    Syl

    Hello,
    Thank you for advising me on my drawing for this portrait taken on the site with a realization in 10 mn.

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    June 7, 2017 4:43am #1900

    mizaelc

    Nice drawing..!
    My critique is to point that the mouth looks too long for this perspective.
    Don't you think there also seems to be a bump in the neck's back?
    Mizael C.

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    June 14, 2017 9:06am #1910

    Syl

    Hello Mizaelc,
    Thank you for telling me what's wrong. I will try to correct that.

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