Evening Whiskey (Jun 13 2025)

by LAOrentas, June 13th 2025 © 2025 LAOrentas
Brain Bummer
Can't provide criticism without knowing what your goals are or what you're looking to improve. Love the impressionism art though!
LAOrentas
Thanks for your comment. Please forgive me as I am an absolute novice/beginner with soft pastel drawing. I'm not familiar with the appropriate terminology.

This was my first attempt at a more complicated piece ... that is, a focused glass with contents on a journal in the foreground and an unfocused background containing a fireplace, walls, lighting, etc.

I would appreciate thoughts on whether or not that focused/unfocused contrast worked.

Thanks!
Bob Milt
I agree with Brain Bummer, I cannot provide critic with knowing your goal/s with this piece.
LAOrentas
Thanks for your comment. Please forgive me as I am an absolute novice/beginner with soft pastel drawing. I'm not familiar with the appropriate terminology.

This was my first attempt at a more complicated piece ... that is, a focused glass with contents on a journal in the foreground and an unfocused background containing a fireplace, walls, lighting, etc.

I would appreciate thoughts on whether or not that focused/unfocused contrast worked.

Thanks!

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