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Thanks! You are right, I am sloppy in shading if I bother to do it at all. Also I have a heck of a time fitting it all on the page. Yes, I do mark the top and bottom before I start but my drawing always somehow gets bigger and bigger, and makes me adjust backwards which pushes parts off the page :/
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The proportions and whatnot, look good to me, id just try being less scratchy with your lines to show the curves better
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Great advice! My lines have been terribly scratchy since day 1, since I was a kid. Will make more of a conscious effort to clean them up. Thanks again!
Very, very nice drawing. Overall the drawing works very well. You have dated the work, a good idea for comparing your work at a later date. You are showing the rib cage. Can not see the hands (Left hand cut off & really can not make out the right hand). The right leg is shaded but the left leg is not. I think the left leg should have been shaded. Let's do some more. You are on a roll. Keep the ball rolling.