The pose is very fluid and you use organic shapes very well. I especially like how you drew the legs, the foreshortened one looks especially good with the way you drew the muscles splayed out a bit where it is laying on top of the block.
The shoulders are a bit confusing in my opinion. Have you tried the technique where you draw cubes/ovals where the chest and hips should be? If you use cubes, it can really help map out the angle in which each part is rotated in 3d space. It can help to also add little spheres or points where the shoulders are in relative to the box of the chest.
This is looking really great though, keep it up!
thanks so much, i'll try it out!
The upper part of the body looks very good + how the head is tilted. The leg on the right side, however, looks like it is not positioned ideally. I think you would need to position it a bit more farther to the right. It is a difficult pose you chose. When I draw such poses, I usually make an ellipsis of the whole hip and then add the legs. As far as I can see, you have not erased any lines you did and so I can see that you did not outline the whole hip area. Starting with such an ellipsis may help you to make it not too narrow.
And unrelated to the drawing itself: it would be good if you could mention the amount of time you have spent on this sketch in your description :)
Noreenja
13 hours ago.
