Hello and good evening, Fai, and welcome to Line of Action, I'm Polyvios, Polyvios Animations, and how are you doing tonight? Greatest job on your range of gesture and clarity of muscles of the uppermost part of the torso. But when it comes to your problem with the insertion point, the shoulder masses all seem too stiffest to me yet. Would you like to please go ahead with 6 minutes of 2 minute shoulder blade studies, all drawn underhanded, and all drawn with your dominant arm?
The reason why you could do this is because, your shoulder blades will be sketched the least stiffest, but the most dynamic, energetic, but fluidest but flowing. For most info, please look into the Burne Hogarth Dyanmic Anatomy and Life Drawing books on Amazon.
My hat's off, and thanks.
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