Figure Critique Wanted !

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    https://imgur.com/a/MdmiCCD

    Im looking for some guidance on how I can improve my figure drawing. Especially with gesture and capturing dynamic poses. Also any comments on whether my values read okay would be helpful. I don’t really know what I should be focusing my practice on.
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    #37991
    Just practice the gesture regularly and You'll know by yourself what to do now and then
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    #37999
    This is MUUUCH better than what I can do, but if I were to give even a small bit of critique, i'd say only on the perspective of the figure.
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    #38006
    とてもスタイリッシュな線で良い。かっこいい。
    受け取った感情を誇張して加速させて描いてみるとダイナミックになります。
    一枚目は足の接地面は良いが、形の精巧さをもっと向上できる。
    足や手だけのデッサンをすると良いと思う。
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    #38008
    Hi

    I like the look and feel of the drawings... also that the proportions are slightly overstated. 


    Still for example in the first drawing the leg in the background looks a bit to thin for me, even for a exaggerated drawing.

    I am impressed by the 3rd drawing (the 10 min) it captures the gesture very well. The only thing I see here is the upper thigh (right leg, on the left side) seems a bit off, I think a bit to round and thick this time... 

    In total, skillfully drawn and nicely shaded in all drawings ...
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