Mika Kamiya

Hi! Great drawing, love your manga style, good job :) I would try to pay more attention to proportions (the left arm is too small compared to the rest of the body). And try drawing both arms as well, do not be afraid to do it! Love your line and how you solved clothes.

The arms are a bit small in comparison to the rest of the body; the top of the shirt also has an unnecessary wrinkle that makes it seem a bit confusing. This is a personal opinion, but I believe the inner thighs of the legs should be closer to each other.

Quite pleasant, I think you should add more volume to the sleeve, also showing the inner strucutre to add 3dimensionality