"You Found Out. huh?!

Study for a later collage (currently in the designing process). The college will be based on the drawing here called "Thrilled Dance partner". I feel the hand to arm through the hair in the head is relatively stiff, and the gesture is nearly dead or not moving. I feel lost looking for my "push spots" Do you see where the push spots are and where they should be emphasised? I have looked at it too much. I am Blind and Frustrated. What do you do when you become visually story blind to recover your sight back? Thanks for the help. All the best, JCML Fine Art