Forum posts by Kalliste

These are 8-10 min fig drawings. I tried incorporating shadows while retaining the rhythm which I don't know if its working. I also tried simplifying some shapes and exaggerate some parts.

Sorry for the Low quality pics :([img]112618 https:/imgur.com/gallery/4FINWVz[/img]

I drew 2 same figures because i'm not really satisfied with it but in the end.. I'm still not.

Hello, everyone! Thank you so much for the feedback! I took notes and made into these points:

*Using proper shadow and highlights (also the solution for blockage of shadow from ruby1600's comment)

*show of balance, effort, gravity and rhythm of the body

I want to address each objective one by one. Slowly incorporating it to my figures. This time I focused on the balance, effort and rhythm from the feedback of Swen :) I'm sorry for the messy lines lol. I made these too slow as I tend to overthink things ack. I'll keep practicing!

I want to improve my gestures and my understanding of usage of straights and curves in simplifying the muscles of human body.

[img]Fig https:/imgur.com/gallery/tNI90ee[/img]

Here are 8-10 min fig drawing!! You're welcome to critique me harshly, want to improve badly