The Recuter

I love the coloring; you obviously have a great understanding of the planes of shape on the face. they all very stand out. I love the use of reds and yellows to create depth. Especially with the cheekbones, nose, and forehead. It creates the face as a beautiful focal point. I think my main critique would be trying to create more depth using blues for shadows. Also working on coloring, focusing on the hair and clothing instead of just the face. You also didn't shade a lot of the white areas (the whites of eyes, teeth, and the white shirt.) I think adding light blues for shading there would also help. But I think if you worked on that, the drawing would fall less flat. But overall, very good coloring.