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9 feb, short sketch
© 2019 Saburton33i think this was a 50 second sketch, a shortcritique would be appreciated thank you!
Ms Talkin
Your lines have a lot of energy, and a lyrical quality. You could make this effect stronger by composing your figure completely within the picture plane, and using line weight variation to differentiate between the figure and the drapery.
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Hi Suburton33,
Looks great, a couple of confusing elements; I'm not sure what way the head is pointing? You could try using an eye line and a center line on the face.
-Slick