Asking for Critique

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November 1, 2017 10:23am #448

Bastion

I was just wondering if I am doing this correctly or if there is anything I can do better. I have just started, I've been on and off again trying to practice, some days I get to busy to do it.I want to where my errors were and what I need to correct if anything. I'll take any critique anyone can tell me. Thank you! :)

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November 16, 2017 12:37am #2157

dwmurray247

Bastion,
Congratulations on getting into drawing. Overall, your proportions look fine. My main recommendation to you is to use full lines, instead of short strokes for each segment. Even if you still use multiple lines, full lines will give a better sense of the gesture and the form overall.

Good luck on your continued endeavors.

Dan

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