Thanks for the critiques guys!
So to elaborate on the whole problem of messy colors and harsh lines, I've always found it hard to draw lineless colored art. What would you say I do if I want to keep the lineart style? From what I'm hearing, I'm guessing I just need to be more careful with coloring and not be so messy? Or if I go with the "drop the lines" method, any tips on how would I go about doing so?
