Messages du forum par Ceciart

Hello! Werewoke. I hope this message finds you well.
My feedback for your next gesture exercise is try some of these options:

1) make the principle lines (spine, neck and part that indicate where is the body's weight on that the moviment) more visible/contrasting than the others lines. You kinda made it on the second image and you can "force it more" on the next gestures' exercises if you set the pen's tablet to recognize different pressures and choose a brush that is able to change oppacity according to pen pressure. (In case you decide to do this exercise on traditional media, you can make the lines with different pressures as well.)

2) even if you draw multiples shorts lines, try to draw them closer to each other, so the shapes can look more solid.

P.S.: I don't know if I explained things clear. English is not my mother language so I go in a verbose way :-(

First of all, I like what I see, really. My advice is maybe you can challenge yourself to draw the ribcage and angle of hips as ovals (like Proko shows on his video here >>

) . I believe this can bring more dynamics to your draws.

Also, did you read this article already? >> https://line-of-action.com/article/happens-30-seconds-isnt-enough

Specially the last paragraph may be interesting to you.

Cheers and keep going :-)