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    #2395
    one of biggest concerns is that my proportions are always out of wack even when i am looking at a reference
    #2397
    Hi guijinci!

    I'm afraid I can't see any of the images. Can you try uploading images to a different image host site, for example http://www.imgur.com ?
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    #2406
    They look really excellent
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    #2407
    Thank you!
    #2410
    These are great, especially the last one with the model on the floor. All of them have good weight and really stand out as individual compositions. Really awesome!!!
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    #2412
    I agree with the others.

    The middle pose in your first picture seems odd at the hip joint. I feel that the back part should be slightly longer
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    #2416
    Thank you so much!!
    #2417
    Thanks for the critique, IJ, I totally agree

    I will keep that in mind next time:)
    #2419
    You're up for a good start! Your line work is very controlled and clear. There's room for improvement though. You seem to focus a lot on the contours. I would like to see how you handle the figure in relatively longer time limits, say 3-5 minutes. While 30 sec drawings are a good exercise, especially to warm up, that's too little time to really analyze and understand what the body is doing.
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    #2420
    Thank you! Yes i focus on the shape of the body. I did post a couple longer poses with the same package (there are a couple 1 mins, 5 mins, a 10 min, and a 25 min at the very end of the album)

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