Long pose critique

First time doing long poses in a couple of weeks, also my first time posting here. All critique is welcome!


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Nicer job, Jollyspices, nicer work on your gestures, forces and forms, but let's see you draw even more funnier flows in your gestures and lines and shapes. How would you love to lose all of your uptight rigidity of the forces and forms with 40 more minutes of 2 minute gesture poses? As a result, it can and will make your poses less straighter and merely literal, but to make your shapes a lot more bigger, broader, and incredibly funnier and hilarious in terms of energy and vitality. For most details, please look into the 2 Walt Stanchfield ebooks on Amazon.com . My hat's off to you.