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Thanks for the response! I really appreciate it :) I'm going to look into Sycra's youtube videos so thanks for that as well :)

I have some examples of poses I thought up off the top of my head from more recent times that I want to get back to you on to see what you think. If they are at least slightly better, I'm going to focus on my imagination training! Because I think I need that as well definitely.

thanks again

Are all of these from references??

http://postimg.org/Bj4780

This isn't everything I've done, but some things I've done in the past. Some aren't as good as others, and some are super old and some I've spent more time on. If someone would take any of their very precious time to look through any of these, I'd greatly, greatly, greatly appreciate it. Thank you in advance! :)

Hey!

So I've enjoyed your gesture drawings! :) I definitely see each pose clearly. Basing off of what I've been told in the past, outlining may be something to look at in the future. When you get into more detailed drawings like your bottom picture at the very bottom right, and some others obviously, there is a clear outer edge line around the whole figure. I suggest experimenting without using an outer edge the entire way around and see what it may be like. Don't worry though, I struggle with the same thing :) I hope this is helpful in any way, good luck in the future!

Hey!

Hear me out, this is my first post on anything for this site, but I'm hoping to help! I've been told the goal of gestures are to capture as much of general pose as possible. And in some of your gestures I definitely understand the pose. However, what I find that you don't have is a basic line to work off of. What I mean by that is a line that can capture as much of the pose as possible but is simply one line. It could be the spine, or a "C" to get a general idea of how this pose is going to work.

This is a 30 second gesture I did, but I darkened some of the lines and made a middle line red just for an example.

http://postimg.org/image/shc7gcd1p/

And the "C" approach that I've seen on another forum

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/if0an7n8224k7z7/AACHUIg3GYJ3GK3LdbqaSJnxa?dl=0#/

I hope this helps even in the slightest of ways and that I'm not too late for a response! Wish you luck on illustrating your stories :)