damianoriak的論壇貼

thank you for the constructive feedback! i will start to apply the tips shortly!

Hello, I was wondering how to improve a simple portrait I made, are the eyes wrong? any tips would be great, just starting out on the voyage of portraits, been practicing a bit of proportion from andrew loomis and jose M. Parramon.
Thanks!
https://40.media.tumblr.com/b57e0efaefa921cd6322b2aaa6776557/tumblr_nx2nrhE2Dl1spbr8oo1_540.jpg