Flappy的論壇貼

hey guys.... my name is anass saidi and im trying to improve my drawing skills.
this is some not bad fast drawing ive done last week so you can help me with your opinion.
thank you in advance

thank you sirs.
i'm just having fun with this forum cause there is not so much people. but I'll submit in conceptart soon.
for now i think you guys are right about the feet and faces. i'll work on them this morning.
otherwise here is some other sketches from hundreds i did this 2 weeks. so please feel free to critic them too. because sometime we cannot see what are we doing.
http://flappyart.blogspot.com/2013/08/gesture-drawing-practice.html

here is some 3 to 5 minutes sketches.
i'll be glad if you give me some critics.
http://25.media.tumblr.com/16ecb59fe7b0407512a79b6a9588c185/tumblr_mqglxse0dM1qggqu0o1_500.png
as i think i should work more on faces. as i see.

oh yes. thanks you. i took too much time on the shadows to get them right.
hh there was too big than this :).
may be because the moon was too big that i couldn't get them right.

it's my pleasure man.
just keep practicing. we all still learning.

oh thanks.
i'm still working on my sense of composition with reading some of the andrew loomis books.
the beauty is hard.

hello there.
my name is anass saidi but you can call me (Flappy)
i'm a student and in love with digital painting.
and here is my tumblr and my deviantart:
http://flappyart.tumblr.com/
http://flappy-anass.deviantart.com/
please feel free to take any other artwork you want and critic is the much you can.
i'm gonna start with this one here.

hey miss
i'm just saying that i like your sense of colors and it seems that you already got your own style.
i'm not saying that to search for the style more but just letting you know.
(please don't search for it or i'll be doing a mistake monition this point here)
otherwise i liked this artwork
http://mbrandi97.deviantart.com/art/The-Nightmare-Before-Christmas-345936300
cause it got some of searching and efforts.
but you only need to work for some values and depth sense.
and i recommend this video as a support to help you with values.

so please watch the video to the and and let me know it's clear for you or should i give you some thing more detailed.

hey harkensaw
nice to see your posts and i like that you're working on gesture
once I've seen the first sketches i said that you can improve faster than what you think man
all what i need to tell you is just keep practicing.
i followed this method and it worked for me so much.
http://johnclapp.com/improvin.htm
its jhon clapp theory and i respect it.
feel free to ask more about Technics and resources .