Hi there Cyan,
I like your drawing, especially your attention to the face. The lighting and expression are very nice.
In addition to the others' comments on the stretched torso, it also looks like the rotation of his lower body is off. The abs and belly button look like they're rotated toward the viewer, but once you get down to the hips and legs, they don't seem to be lined up. You should be able to see more of the top/inner area of his thigh.
Keep up the good work!
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