Props are Weird

25 Minute pose.

Immediate critiques are mostly that I took out some of the dynamism of her backbend. I didn't foreshorten sufficienty through the waist, which put the frame too far away from her body and din't allow me to describe the squeezing of her shoulder blades and the arch of her back.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form