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             Tx Williep
          
          Tx Williep
                        
    
    
    
      Really good figure. Hands, feet, and proportions just fine. Work on the shading of your figure. You are coming along very, very nicely. Keep up the good work.
    
    
    
    
      
                        
             Tx Williep
          
          Tx Williep
                        
    
    
    
      To be more specific on the shading, the current shading is a little helter skilter. I would recommend you follow the muscle structures which should hold things together better.
    
    
    
    
      
                        
             Catemuse
          
          Catemuse
                        
    
    
    
      I love this! I have no critique, just enjoy the bold and varied strokes, the expressive gesture. I love it. What was the medium? Something about it feels digital.
    
    
    
    
      
                        
             Zet2908
          
          Zet2908
                        
    
    
    
      Thanks a lot for the feedback. I drew the whole thing in digital (manga studio 5), used bright color at first, then corrected the lines with darker color and did some shading.
    
    
    
    
      
                        
             Fugummy
          
          Fugummy
                        
    
    
    
      Looks good! I would recommend focusing on the weight of your lines, maybe making certain lines (Especially ones being hit by the most light) thinner. The anatomy is looking great!
    
    
    
    
      





 
           
           
           
           
           
          
The forms are really getting in there in terms of the anatomy, but, if I could recommend you on something, I would suggest go for watching the tones on the figures,please? Why don't you please check this link out????
The reason why is because, it can and shall be more beneficial to your understanding of lights and shadows in any kind of drawing and sketching. They could be extremely useful on your core shadows, lights, and so on.
Hope this has been completely and totally effective.