Figure practice

First time uploading here, also first practicing with nude models. Any tips of how to improve?

Polyvios Animations March 21, 2021 2:47am

Nicer job on your first-ever post here on Line of Action, Bubs. That's a very, mighty good job on your potential.

So, if I shall and will be able to really give you a factual critique, it can be just for this one: I love how much structure and construction on your figure pose here, except for the right foot of that female nude I'm seeing there;too rough. Very good on the face there, too. Truth be told, if you would be able to constantly improve your figure sketches, why don't you please suppliment these sketches, with sketching exercises of practicing, hands and feet, through 154 minutes of 30 second hands and feet poses, for 4 days????? (154 x 60/30/4, 9240/30/4, 380/4=95 quick drawings a day, all in horizontal and/or vertical flips). The arguement behind this is because, if your next goal is to make your shorthands less undertured and stiff, and the most dynamic, energetic, fluid, and lively.

Cheers to you, and I hope you'll find these completely and totally detailed for you.

Bubs March 21, 2021 8:16pm

Thank for the suggestion! It is true that my feet tend to break the dynamic of my poses, thank you for the exercises tips I will practice more.

Deimus March 21, 2021 4:58am

Hello! Try to practice more models from the back as from the front it seems that you master it exceptionally well.
Greetings from Argentina!!

Bubs March 21, 2021 8:13pm

Hello, thank you for the suggestion!

Greetings from Brazil!!

Yutongart (unregistered visitor) March 22, 2021 10:56am

I really like how the shading and lighting are in the right place, great job! But I find the lines quite short and choppy, so I think you could try drawing with a shorter amount of time, making the lines more fluid, and these drawing will look amazing! I hope this helped ❤️

Bubs March 25, 2021 11:21pm

Thank you, I will try your suggestion :)