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Mrd1i,

I feel if you varied the line quality the image would have been even more dynamic.

Try the same pose try by switching between

Hard and dark

Dark and thin

Light and thick

Skipping sections and light and thin

I thinL you will surprise yourself. How much more expressive the work will become.

All the best,

JCML Fine Art

Great work on your caricature and distortion of fat and muscles and bones in your nude female anatomy. Way to go on your job, Mrd1i.

My suggestion is that there's not too much of the exaggeration enough so far. Would you please warm up and loosen up with 30 minutes of 29 second figures in scribble forms? (1800 seconds/29 seconds=62 poses in loose form)

The reason why you could and should do this littler idea is because, to help make your fats the least stiffest and the most fluidest, emotional, and feeling in terms of your lines and shapes and spaces and forms.

My hat's off to you. Polyvios Animations.

P.S. Check out this sketchbook vid.

Enjoy!