25-Second Lion Stretching Reverse-Upside-Down

Done as part of a practice session with poses of 25 seconds in length. My current goal is: Improve my light touch to all my animals. I'm really and totally tapping into my artistic way of seeing this lion, in terms of the edges, and the gestures (forces). Also, my light touch. So, what do you think and feel about this? What can I possibly do to improve my agile touch??