The proportions are great, the gesture is on point
maybe the next step is to practice smooth singular lines (to avoid overdrawing lines on the same area)
Looks great - bottom left and right are my favorites; I think that maybe working on the overall flow of the figure would help - a few of them look a bit stiff so working on that might help you get them to appear more natural
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The proportions are great, the gesture is on point
maybe the next step is to practice smooth singular lines (to avoid overdrawing lines on the same area)