Hello bro.
I am a chinese girl. I think you have a more correct understanding of the structure of the eye, but there are some major problems in terms of perspective. Look at your painting, the eyelids in 6 are definitely not that long, they must be short on the sides, and the spacing in 2, 4, 7, 10 is obviously too small, which does not meet the standard of positive viewing angle is the length of five eyes, and between the two corners of the eyes should be the length of an eye, I hope you can pay attention to some in this regard. In addition, the eyes are also very important, the eyes in 1, 12 are very unfocused, powerless, and have no vitality, but the overall is great, I hope you continue to cheer!!
