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    I can see how your focus on line weight has helped. You convey a lot more with fewer lines now. As far as where to improve. I can see potential in continuiong your journey into line weight, going even thicker with what you have. The one thing I would say detracts from your work is how some lines are so light they feel that they fade away or just exist out in space. I see this specifically in the top row left and right sketches. It took me a while to figure out that there was a cloth there, and a couple of lines in the other show the form as much rounder that it seems it actually is.

    Great work! I hope to see you on the critique runs again!

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    #2990

    Okay, that makes sense. I'll try to scale it down. Thanks for the help

    #2971

    I've been trying to uppload a photo of a drawing I did for critique, and it keeps saying the picture didn't upload properly. It's in JPG format. Is there a solution to this issue?

    Thanks for any help. :)

    • Kim edited this post on September 21, 2018 5:23pm.
    • Kim edited this post on September 23, 2018 6:20pm. Reason: Closing support request since OP accepted answer
    #2716

    Just noticed this and I really appreciate your, mention of that past project (and the possibility of something in the future)