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Hello,
I cannot be sure what area of your art you wish to be critiqued so take what I say with a grain of salt. I think that just with the sitting pose, I believe it is a bit stiff for a gestural drawing. My suggestion would be to still think of the entire figure as single line of action, despite that the figure is sitting down. Be a bit more bold with the line of action to loosen it up.
Thank you for letting me for critic your work.

Hello,
I cannot be sure what area of your art you wish to be critiqued so take what I say with a grain of salt. I think that just with the sitting pose, I believe it is a bit stiff for a gestural drawing. My suggestion would be to still think of the entire figure as single line of action, despite that the figure is sitting down. Be a bit more bold with the line of action to loosen it up.
Thank you for letting me for critic your work.

it seems like u are having a similar problem i am having ,idk for sure but i feel like u are not spending enough time on these sketches ,especially in the beginning of practicing with a timer   u should give urself grace and pause it now and then i say it as i do it too or do lesser drawings with more time to work on single drawing,i don't mean be slow ,u should try to do it as fast as possible  definitiely but if u can't even complete atleast the rough outline of muscle what's the point u won't be able to get much out of it.trust me u will get faster after awhile but u need to concentrate on geting the essence of the pose on the paper at the minimum.