You did a great job, to improve your work you would need to add some expression to it
Here are some tips:
- Giving him a proudful posture to match his swollen breast, you know, he's a rooster
- Along with the posture I told you about, maybe cheer him up a bit. His face tells us he's happy but his body language doesn't translate the same. Make him look up (singing with all his soul) instead of down, there's no need to look at the guitar, he's joyful and confident
- Try to break down your piece in shapes instead of the bones you did, works better with me and gets be better results
You did a great job, to improve your work you would need to add some expression to it
Here are some tips:
- Giving him a proudful posture to match his swollen breast, you know, he's a rooster
- Along with the posture I told you about, maybe cheer him up a bit. His face tells us he's happy but his body language doesn't translate the same. Make him look up (singing with all his soul) instead of down, there's no need to look at the guitar, he's joyful and confident
- Try to break down your piece in shapes instead of the bones you did, works better with me and gets be better results
Peace