May 14 2020 5min/30min

Done as part of a practice session with poses of 5 minutes in length. My current goal is: Reduce stiffness and make my drawings feel more dynamic, energetic, fluid

Rentora May 16, 2020 1:45am

Gestures look good, you captured the pose but porportion are off. Proportion is coming if pratice or measurement. if you want to put less scribbly line you can try to ghost them more. draw a ghost line then draw the real line.

Sukekun May 20, 2020 5:50am

Thanks for your advice, yes I'm going to try the ghost line, although I'm deliverately altering proportions in order to get a more cartoon vibe, do you have advice on that as well?

Polyvios Animations May 18, 2020 4:39am

Nice promise, Sukekun, I really love your gestures, forms, and spaces in your figures. Merely, I've got one most smaller request: Why don't you go for 5 minutes of 1 minute sketches, if you pretty please?? Because, your sketches will become the least stiffer and the most dynamic, energetic, and fluider. Desire that it'll help you go even more forward in your next goal.

Polyvios Animations

Sukekun May 20, 2020 5:51am

<span style="caret-color: #ffffff; color: #ffffff; font-family: Raleway, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; -webkit-tap-highlight-color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0); -webkit-text-size-adjust: 100%; background-color: #282425;">Hi,sorry for the late reply, thank you very much for your critique. Definitely I will do .....next time I'll upload 5 minutes of 1 minutes sketches, those are a sure challenge for me as I tend to focus on specific parts and spend a lot time trying to polish. I'm taking your advice in order to get smoother...thanks</span>

Sukekun May 20, 2020 5:47am

Hi,sorry for the late reply, thank you very much for your critique. Definitely I will do .....next time I'll upload 5 minutes of 1 minutes sketches, those are a sure challenge for me as I tend to focus on specific parts and spend a lot time trying to polish. I'm taking your advice in order to get smoother...thanks