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May25
© 2020 HellowinterDone as part of a 30 minute class.
My current goal is: Better proportions
Amby T
Hi hellowinter.
These are gorgeous animal studies. I love how much life and movement you were able to capture. There is a lot of great squash and stretch and curved lines pitted against straight lines that are really making the poses appealing. I feel like the proportions of your horses are pretty spot on, especially in your 60 second gestures. The wolves are gorgeous but maybe could benefit from some of the straights verse curves that are really singing in the horse studies. Proportionwise, the wolves upper bodies seem a little on the larger side as compared to their rears and it makes them feel a little soft and doughy. The wolf on the left hand side of the middle image has such great line of action and it's generating a lot of forward force! Your 5 minute drawings have gorgeous muscle mass renderings. Beautiful work!
Exceptional job, Hellowinter, however, I've got one very smaller idea: Why don't you work out your very first 10 minute sketch, very lighter, pretty please?? Why??? As long as you make a 10 minute animal pose, your lines will become very lightly lightest.
Plead that it'll help you out on your next study.
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