Would love Feedback!

by Jimm, June 26th 2020 © 2020 Jimm

30 minute - 1 pose session. I would love any feedback!

Another one I felt really good about, so I'd really love any and all feedback on how I did and how I could improve!

Done as part of a practice session with a single pose of 30 minutes in length.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form

Wamafi

I love the feet - but the torso/head look a bit cartoonish with everything outlined in the same pen and little value inside the lines. Try mixing it up with different brush sizes to show how much light there is in a particular area.

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Jimm

Thank you so much for your feedback! I'll definitely keep this in mind going forward!

Polyvios Animations

I am so admiring your latest sketch, Beardly, but I've got one small suggestion: Why don't you do 2 more 29 minute 58 second figure studies, pretty please? The reason why is since, your poses will have a very slickest vitality to them. Trust and pray that it will work out for you.

Polyvios Animations

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