25min.

by Zet2908, October 17th 2020 © 2020 Zet2908

Done as part of a 1 hour class.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form

June K

Your drawing is very pretty and attractive. I think you'd better practice using clean lines. Clear lines will surely make your drawing obvious.

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Jordankinsley

looks great! I think you did really well with the porportions. I think the line quality could be worked on, especially around the outline face.

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Pure Water A

Yo this is really good. If you want honest advice then it's the lines. There is an easy practice for this.

https://imgur.com/a/fgO1hzC

Also direction of lines. Angling the lines in a day with the shading actually makes a world of difference. Your line art is on point so if u can do this on the inside your stuff will be top tier.

This is what I believe you can do to improve, besides this your drawing is really good. :p

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Tx Williep

Very nice profile. The position of things (nose, lips eyes, eyebrows) is just fine. Check the eye, it looks a little off. You are coming along nicely. Keep up the good work. Practice and then practice some more.

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