First try doing figuredrawing

That's the greatest job for your first ever post, Bryaniac98. Even if you would rotate this clockwise at 90 degress, then your mood, personality and attitude would be read the best, even if it already does.

My tiniest, smaller criticism is that your lines of action and balance aren't caricatured enough in terms of distortion and exaggeration from within. Would you like to go with 1 hour of 2 minute mood drawings of the figures with attitude and character? (30 doodles capturing the ideas)

The reason why you could and should do this is because, you'll be able to capture the essence, feeling, mood, action and personality for your drawings, even if it's stylized or realistic.

Good luck to you, your current and future goals, and I hope this has been completely and totally useful to you. And if you really wanna get more info, be sure to check out this link here.

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This is really cool! It really stands out stylistically and I can tell you're starting to develop a bit of style within it! I think to further improve on this is working on line quality and trying to make the silhouette more exaggerated.

Thanks for your critique. It's very helpful.