30-Second Upside-Down-Backwards Snail All Airily Crayoned

Done as part of a practice session with poses of 30 seconds in length.

My current goal is: Improve my light touch to all my animals.

This is my snall all loosesly and airily rendered out in my older crayons. What do you think of my agile touch? What can I do to polish it up, or am I all set?