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You can try to deepen the dynamic line

Hello, and good morning/noon/evening, slyper. Great job on your range of motion and movement on your balanced nude pose. Way to go. Keep up your gestures, construction and silhouette.

I am thinking that your figure is just a teensier bit far too stiffer and crudest. Would you please solidify and loosen up your shapes, spaces and forms with a 30 minute class mode of figure poses? The reason why you could and should do this littler criticism is because you'd be able to not only loosen up your figure drawings, but also help you improve your human anatomy for your poses from imagination and from memory. For more than enough info and details, be sure to look into this book right in this link.

Good luck and I hope this helps and benefits you so much.