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Good morning again, Cartoonistahn, how are you? Great job on your anatomy silhouettes of the proportons. Keep up the great work, I'd say!

I love the proportions and angles, but they look, most of them, too rigid to me. Would you please free up your arm with 45 minutes of 5 minute pose drawings? (9 attitude drawings) Your understanding of the human anatomy will get better for you if you'd look at half the models for 2.5 minutes, then draw for the last 2.5 minutes for each and every single pose. For more details, be sure to look into this link again. Good luck and I hope this absolutely helps.

I've looked at this piece a couple of times trying to decide what it is that grabs my attention. I really like the drawing of the woman squatting down (2nd from the right). In just a few lines, you captured her pose in a way that feels sensual, maybe even erotic, but in a way that respects the model and could be displayed in a home without fear of offending any viewers. Its simple, clean, and IMO powerful. Nicely done!

I like the rough sketching, it captures the steadyness really well, i just think you gotta work on line weight since it helps a lot when finding out which muscles are denser in the bigger picture or just appear more than others. Get it?