Set of 5 minute pencil studies

by Pixel202, April 22nd 2023 © 2023 Pixel202
Meant as a warm up and trying to focus on accurate proportions, which was only somewhat sucessful.
Polyvios Animations
Love how much of the most wonderful job you've totally applied to your gestural forces and forms and organic forms, but they all seem a bit far too stilted and rigid to me yet, so how would you like to go for your 10 30 second sketches of the 30 minute class mode, and more? The reason why you could and would and therefore should do this critique is because if you need a goal to make your forces and forms to look like they are having fun, then bring it on. For most info, please kindly look into the PDF of the Shamus Culhane book, Animation From Script to Screen, for the quick sketches exercises.

My hat's off to you, and may you'll find this the most nicest and useful and beneficial.
Elliesaurus Art
Looks very dynamic and fluid, well done. I would say that some of the images look a little bubbly, I can't think of a better word. I think you've over-exaggerated the difference in size between the joints and the rest of the limbs. There is some difference there but not quite that much. The overall proportions look pretty good on most of them, though a couple look a little off.