12 jul 2022

Hello again.

Nicest job on your range of forms and relationships of your difficult construction of your nudest figure. I think you're on to something in terms of how you articulate the body's anatomy of bones and muscles, but I feel that they have been bogged down the most with the scratchiest lines. How would you kindly free up your lines smoothness with 33 minutes of 28 second poses? (1980/28≈71 scribbliest attitude drawings)

As a result, if you do this constructive drawing approach, but working more from your elbow and shoulder for the broadest strokes, then you may be able to be most focused on your lines of action and rhythm in your poses, clothed and/or nude.

My hat's off to you, and please take these with the smallest grain of salt.

The shading is very good to me, and the face! maybe work on the proportions of the body, such as the length of the arm :)