Critique Upon Thine Gesture Drawings. Thank You Very Much.

I am following the Focused Practice: An Exercise For Real Improvement In 33 Days  by The Line of Action. As I don't need a computer to do my gesture drawings. So I would like to get as much feedback as possible to get my gesture drawings as scrumptious as possible in the shortest amount of time possible. Thank you very much and then I can see how feedback and critique works so I may assist another without just pointing out all the beautiful things that they have done with their work. Thank you and be blessed and here is the link for yonder gesture drawings. 

https://imgur.com/gallery/gesture-drawings-day-1-YckOFHG

THANK YOU AGAIN.