New to Pixelovely, Critique request

Hi all,

This is my first time using this site. I decided to sign up and submit my first set of sketches for review and critique. I'd appreciate feedback and pointers on anything you notice and could suggest I do better.

I used the 30 minute class session for the following sketches. As you know, the class starts out with a series of quickly timed poses (I think it starts at 10 seconds) and builds up to about 11 minutes.

Thank you for reading, and I look forward to reading your feedback!

1. <a href="http://i1365.photobucket.com/albums/r757/andydandylion/sketch%20practice%20073113/sketches5_zps3917c17c.jpg">http://i1365.photobucket.com/albums/r757/andydandylion/sketch%20practice%20073113/sketches1_zps0aae74b9.jpg</a>

2. <a href="http://i1365.photobucket.com/albums/r757/andydandylion/sketch%20practice%20073113/sketches2_zpsaf297299.jpg">http://i1365.photobucket.com/albums/r757/andydandylion/sketch%20practice%20073113/sketches2_zpsaf297299.jpg</a>

3. <a href="http://i1365.photobucket.com/albums/r757/andydandylion/sketch%20practice%20073113/sketches3_zps3b11fe3a.jpg">http://i1365.photobucket.com/albums/r757/andydandylion/sketch%20practice%20073113/sketches3_zps3b11fe3a.jpg</a>

4. <a href="http://i1365.photobucket.com/albums/r757/andydandylion/sketch%20practice%20073113/sketches4_zps8ceecef3.jpg">http://i1365.photobucket.com/albums/r757/andydandylion/sketch%20practice%20073113/sketches4_zps8ceecef3.jpg</a>

5. <a href="http://i1365.photobucket.com/albums/r757/andydandylion/sketch%20practice%20073113/sketches5_zps3917c17c.jpg">http://i1365.photobucket.com/albums/r757/andydandylion/sketch%20practice%20073113/sketches5_zps3917c17c.jpg</a>

Hi there!

I'd really like to look at your drawings, but I'm having a hard time getting to them.

Can you try to fix up your post? It's okay to just post the direct links to the images without the fancy BBCode. :)

Hi Sanne, sorry about that. I'm still new to this site. I went ahead and edited that. Thanks for letting me know. I look forward to your critique and tips!

Nice gestures! Keep going. I think that using line of action will help a lot making it stronger. I learnend that from watching cartoons and the preston blair book. I now try to apply that to my own drawings.

Thank you mitchleeuwe!