The Bar.

Done as part of a practice session with poses of 30 seconds in length. My current goal is: Improve at correctly controlling & understanding 3-point perspective in a scene and/or environment. I really didn't see the bar counter too much, but I really, really, totally felt it with the whole bar room thereto. What do you think? What can I do to make it really, totally, totally excellent? Or am I all set?