Untitled© 2020 Jel
Done as part of a practice session with poses of 5 minutes in length.
My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form
This is really well done! I'm also learning the basic han form, so I find It really difficult to think on what you can improve. The best thing I could say is keep at it, and I guess work a bit on the anatomy of the neck? Overall this is a great drawing.
Nice job on your potential, JeLiWa, that's great work you've got there.
However, I've got one little request: I love how you've got going on the light gesture from within, so, why don't you please loosen up and caricature your heads with 44 more minutes of 30-second heads, please?
The reason why is because, your head and facial construction forces could be the least stiffest, and the most dynamic, energetic, and fluid of them all!
Hope you'd found these completely, definitely and totally helpful and productive.