Still life fruits Not too happy with this , help!

by Aleem80, October 20th 2021 © 2021 Aleem80

Done as part of a practice session with poses.

My current goal is: Improve my shading and rendering of light

Haiikaii

Great study!

The proportions look natural and the colours are amazing. Well done!

In my opinion try using harder lines. Harsher light spots and shadows, so it doesn't look too soft or incomplete. It just needs that final touch.

Overall outstanding practice!

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Ori Concept Arts

It seems like a nice painting , Maybe needs more bounce light off the white surface. Have fun with it. why you are not happy with it?..

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